This is a piece from the book I've sent to publishers. I think it needs polishing still.
“You are returned,” he heard his father say.
“Sire,” it was Lane that answered. “I have.”
“Anything?”
“Nothing, sire. They have vanished. It is as though the world swallowed them.”
He heard his father heave a huge sigh. “Airik?”
“He still searches,” Came Lane’s heavy reply. “He will not be called back from the search.”
A humph from his father and then another heavy sigh.
“I do not know how he is still alive, Sire.” It was the surgeon’s voice breaking through this time.
“The blade should have ripped through his heart or even pierced his lung. It missed all things vital.”
“The prince,” Lane’s voice was louder as he started to approach only to be called back by the surgeon.
“He is not out of the fire yet,” the surgeon said. “The wound is deep and may still have touched his heart. For now,” there was a pause as he guessed the surgeon to be weighing his words, “he lives.”
“Do what you must to bring my son back to me,” his father commanded. Then his voice changed as he turned to Lane. “Find her. Find her before he wakes.”
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